The Diamond Age 86
The Diamond Age or A Young Lady's Illustrated Primer | |
author | Neal Stephenson |
pages | 499 |
publisher | Bantam Books |
rating | 9/10 |
reviewer | Clampe |
ISBN | |
summary | Interesting offering from everyone's new favorite |
The Scenario
First off, let me say we know that Diamond Age came out 1995. It is not our intention to review every book ever written, but Stephenson has received so much attention lately from Cryptonomicon that it is of some use to show that he did not spring fully formed from the head of Zeus. For those old school fans of Stephenson, this review will allow them to sit in renewed righteousness, while helping the new fan pick their next Stephenson read, assuming they managed to pound through all nine hundred plus pages of Cryptonomicon.
I'm going to spare you the book synopsis other than to say that this is a science fiction novel set in the not too distant future. It is heavy into nanotechnology, and treats the subject with insight and forethought. The real glory of this book, however, is in its examination of the nature of intelligence, human social interaction, and culture.
Stephenson crafts a very believable story centered around a genius nanotechnologist who breaks the rules of his tribe to help his daughter, and the young girl from a poor background he inadvertantly helps. The development of Nell, the tortured child who rises above her early experiences, allows the author to dive deeply into the differences between knowledge and intelligence, offering up a richly detailed conversation with the reader.
What's Bad?
There are passages in the book where the protagonist is in a computer story of sorts, engaged in a fantasy setting. While these pieces aren't bad per se, I treated them a little like the poetry fragments in Tolkien. They're OK sometimes, but I skipped them maybe more than I should have. There is also a very annoying character named Miranda who seems superfluous to the story to me.
The other trouble I have with the book is the way it ends. Now Stephenson, like Orson Scott Card, seems to have a damned tough time ending a book. For Card it stems from deep personal philosophies, but I'm not sure that's the case for Stephenson. Still, while the last five pages of the book slide, it does not detract significantly from the rest of the book.
What's Good?
Alot. First of all, this is a very believable view of life after nanotechnology hits its stride. It's also a great forecast on future geopolitical tensions, and how the next century will deal with group identification when physical distance is overwhelmed by omnipresent communications.
Still, the most enjoyable part of this book is the examination of what makes people both intelligent and driven. Stephenson seems to say that a rough childhood can sometimes create an adult who is super intelligent. Many Slashdotters may agree with this sentiment. Though it's not a completely convincing argument, it is good to see a book treat it not in just a singular character sense, but as a larger social phenomenon.
So What's In It For Me?
Reading this book will not only satisfy that craving for quality science fiction, but will make you think also. Very few writers are able to do that, and Stephenson seems to have it down. It's one of those books where a few weeks after finishing it you'll still turn some of its ideas around in your noggin. It's probably not as good as Cryptonomicon, but it's pretty darned close.
Go buy this book. Do whatever it takes to convince Stephenson to continue writing quality science fiction.
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Zodiac (Score:1)
Endings: Stephenson and Gibson (Score:1)
In Snow Crash and Diamond Age, the alternative (the Drummers in Diamond Age; the antenna-heads in Snow Crash), are portrayed negatively and defeated at the end.
The problem I have with both authors is the length of the elaborate "action sequences" needed to push these plots to their fantastic conclusions. I find the descriptions of technology and sociology, and the atmospherics much more interesting. Diamond Age was really spectacular in this way.
Re:Stephenson books are great (Score:1)
Patience, grasshoppper. Remember everything you read in the book (especially the footnotes; don't skip them!), and the actual sequence of events will slowly start to assemble in your head. Don't watch that tape with the happy face on it, and beware the squeak!
mahlen
Decisions terminate panic.
--Chinese fortune cookie
Re:Don't forget Zodiac! (Score:1)
Re:Neal Stephenson's "The Great Simoleon Caper" (Score:1)
I would say that "The Great Simoleon Caper", "Snow Crash", and "Diamond Age" form sort of a trio in Stephenson's writings: they are all bound together around very similar idea of future geopolitics (e.g. First Dustributed Republic appears first in "The Caper", then migrates into the "Snow Crash", then "Diamond Age").
"Spew" is a bit off the track there--the story is different, but still interesting for geeky folk--it actually is about the geeky folk.
Whats the Deal with the Endings (Score:1)
Re:Don't forget Zodiac! (Score:1)
Yes I think his characters are realy good, from punks (YT) to nerds (Da5id). He seems to realy let the characters live.
Re:Miranda - not that important (Score:1)
involved. Nell didn't even think about Miranda's existence until the book was almost over (during her discussion
with Hackworth when she finished the Primer). It made Miranda's importance seem like one of Stephenson's
afterthougts.
If she would have had random ractors rasing her,she wouldnot have become so emontinly envolved.
Diamond Age had PROBLEMS (Score:1)
The tool you MUST have to read The Diamond Age! (Score:1)
What I did (and I strongly recommend) is that you keep a list of words you don't know (and their page numbers), and look 'em up in the biggest dictionary you can access (if I were less lazy, I'd provide an online dictionary link - right about here!). Then scan back over the page they came from and see how much that knowledge richens the book for you.
Re:What a coincidence! (Score:1)
(Of course, that was only 4 years ago...)
Missing the point (Score:1)
Snow Crash still remains my favorite simply because of being so easy to read. I think I read it in two days because I just couldn't put it down. But they are all excellent: Stephenson is radidly becoming one of my favorite authors. Everything he writes is excellent.
Possibly the best part of his writing style is the almost Hitchhiker's Guide-style dry witicisms. My girlfriend always asked me, "Is that a funny book?" when I was reading Cryptonomicon. And I'd say, 'no, not really'...but of course I burst out laughing every so often as I read it, so I guess that it is.
DA (Score:1)
Re:What a coincidence! (Score:1)
I guess I just should see reading his books as the best fun to be had while extending your vocabulary...
Wouter
Spew (Score:1)
Yes, I suppose it is about geeky folk as you say, but more like Hackers than like Slashdot.
Re:Zodiac (Score:1)
I think Stephenson was saying that those powers are potentially within the grasp of real (skilled) humans. Hiro and ST(?) are a lot alike in that both are skilled, heroic, and very talented, but are basically (as the story begins) losers.
Now as to buying Stephenson's books on name value, hell yeah! That even extends to articles by him. His books are very detailed and don't rely on technology alone for their plot lines unlike Gibson (who I also like) and Sterling.
Re:Another book to buy... (Score:1)
Actually, they do have a tenuous relation to each other. Ms. Matheson is (I believe) YT. I also believe the world of Diamond Age is the future of Snow Crash.
My advice is, Snow Crash, Diamond Age, Zodiac, then Cryptonomicon. Of course, I haven't read the latter yet, but I just haven't found it out there yet. I can't wait to read it.
Re:Endings: Stephenson and Gibson (Score:1)
To me, the ending in Snow Crash was almost irrelevant to the sheer tidal wave of strange new ideas (the nam-shub of Enki, the supersonic rat-dogs, the Mataverse itself), weird but excellent characters (Raven, Ng etc.), the cultural references and in-jokes, and the sheer craziness, pace and voice of the writing itself - the pizza-delivery stuff at the beginning, the confrontation with Raven at the rock concert, and chapter 36 ("Until a man is twenty-five, he still thinks, every so often, givent the right circumstances, he could be the baddest motherf***er in the world
Diamond Age is more measured and constructed with more care and thought than the adrenalin pace of SC, but its density of ideas is still to me the main fascination.
I loved Neuromancer, but found the other two in that series, MLO and Count Zero were just more of the same. I really liked "Burning Chrome" especially the title story and "the Winter Market".
But for my tastes, even though they're different, SC left Neuromancer in the dust as THE Cyberpunk novel.
Re:DA (Score:1)
Stephenson, the person, the author (Score:1)
It's easy to see where he gets his geekiness from; he told us that he was in the Boy Scouts as a kid. That's pretty normal, but what's not normal was the fact that one or more of the troop leaders worked in the Ames Lab. Apparently one of their projects was to put corn seeds in high radiation, and plant them to see what happened. The most normal corn stalk got a prize, as did the most mutated. There were many other such stories we were told, but that one stands out in memory.
I like to think that this explains a lot about his outlook on life and his writing...
"During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I was riding the pogostick."
What a coincidence! (Score:1)
Don't forget Zodiac! (Score:2)
Neal's writing... (Score:1)
OK, so a friend persuaded me to jump on the bandwagon earlier this summer and find out more about Neal Stephenson. I picked up Snow Crash and Crypto* hoping that reading the former would offer some insight into his style - or any inside jokes. After finishing *Crash and the first 30 pages of Crypto*, they almost seem written by different authors. The vocabulary and level of detail description is >= 5 steps higher.
Nanotech sounds interesting. Should I read Diamond Age before I start really getting into Crypto* to gain more insight on the background?
Another book to buy... (Score:1)
I must admit that I haven't read any of Stephenson's books, but I am interested. What do you guys/girls say? Is this a book worth ponying up the dough for or what?
Stephenson books are great (Score:1)
Fate intervened, however, during a trip to the half price bookstore, where they had 1 brand new hardcover copy of Wallace's Infinite Jest (another book mentioned in the discussion). I'm up to page 50. It's quite enjoyable, but what the heck is up with "Year of the Tucks Medicated Pad" or "Year of Dairy Products from the American Heartland"?
Re:Another book to buy... (Score:1)
Snow Crash is more approachable (Score:1)
While I liked Diamond Age, I thought it went a little bit too far into the "weird zone" at times.
Snow Crash, on the other hand, is thoroughly enjoyable from start to finish. If you liked Cryptonomicon but couldn't get into Diamond Age as easily, you may want to try Snow Crash instead. And unlike Diamond Age, the ending of Snow Crash didn't make me feel like hunting down Stephenson and beating him with the manuscript until he coughed up the real ending.... ;-)
Un-fun endings--Stephenson's Bane (Score:4)
I've read both Diamond Age and Snow Crash. Both books had great beginnings, but both books ended up meandering off into a very speculative (credulity-straining) endings.
Both books had a semi-mystic subplot. In Diamond Age it was the cult of the mass-human-hosted computer. In Snow Crash it was the idea that our minds have a sort of primative assembly language that can be used to reprogram them. In both stories, these ideas were blown up too far. We get fantastic imagry of the driven scientist in Diamond Age, falling down into insanity as he is drawn toward the drummer cult (a group of people who together comprise a giant biologicly hosted computer). But at the same time, the wonderful future detail of the book is dropped as Stephenson descends into the murky realm of the mind. I love how he can paint the future--but switching gears bogs down his books.
Compared with Snow Crash (8/10), I would give Diamond Age a 6/10. The first half of the book is so much fun to read. You just want to be a part of his future world (or at least, want to be shown more of it). But that just makes the second half more depressingly mediocre. And of course, you have a sudden, jolting ending as loose plot ends are quickly tied up and the whole thing shudders to a halt.
I have a feeling the Crypt. is much better--and it's on my reading list. Stephenson is good, but not 9/10 good. Not in Diamond Age, at least.
My favorite Stephenson Novel (Score:3)
The Diamond Age remains my favorite Stephenson novel. I've read all of his novels that he's published under his own name (I've read that he has a psuedonym, too) except for The Big U which I haven't managed to find.
I find it interesting that the reviewer didn't like Miranda:
There is also a very annoying character named Miranda who seems superfluous to the story to me.
She's one of the reasons I liked this book so much. Stephenson's very good about speculating on what the future may hold (It's a good thing he's a speculative fiction writer, huh ;) ). I don't want to give too much away, but I think it's really important that Stephenson added her character into the interaction of the primer. I don't think that the primer could have worked without her. It raised Nell. I don't care how intricate a computer intelligence is, there's a level of human interaction necessary for raising a healthy child. I think Miranda represents the human aspect of advancing technology, and as such, she is in no way superfluous.
On another note, I read The Diamond Age while studying for the GRE. I had to look up alot of words (i.e. "a Propaedeutic Enchridion" p. 184 paperback edition) that I'd never even remotely seen before. I ended up scoring really highly on the Verbal section, so perhaps I have Neal Stephenson to thank for that ;)
I recommend all of Stephenson's novels. One criticism many people have about his novels are the detail he gives to secondary characters such as Miranda. I think this is one of the reasons why he's not only a good writer when it comes to scientific speculation, but why he's a great writer, period. He actually develops all of his characters to the point where he creates believable worlds and communities instead of empty plot outlines to show off his ideas like many SF writers unfortunately do. His books are literature. Read them.
Miranda (Score:1)
One o the points this book makes, is the power of subversiveness. Miranda subversivly raised nell, witout knowing (till well after she started).
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DA and Snackwell Cookies (Score:1)
I have to agree about the ending, though. It was like eating those Snackwells cookies - it just left me feeling a little unsatisfied.
Diamond Age is one of my faves (Score:2)
Not that playing favorites with an author's books is a particularly productive exercise, but Diamond Age was one of my favorites. Aside from Stephenson's writing style, Cryptonomicon was an entirely different novel. Also a book which I enjoyed immensely.
I believe the order in which you read Stephenson's work is imporant. Starting with Snow Crash, I read them in the order in which they were released (haven't read Zodiak so I don't know what that does to my theory):
I at least recommend reading his earlier works before attempting Cryptonomicon. They will give you a taste of his writing style, which he takes to the max in Crypto, and I can imagine might be a turn off for the uninitiated.
As far as this review, I disagree with all but one of the complaints. The ending is too abrupt, but then again, that seems to be a trait of Stephenson's work.
Aside from the "moral" of the story, I also enjoyed Stephenson's great capacity to produce metaphors. Diamond Age is dominated by metaphors. Whereas the reviewer found them boring, I actually enjoyed them. I kept imagining what it would have been like to have that Book when I was a kid. It reminded how receiving a TI 99/4a computer as a child really started me on a different path from my peers. Anyhow, I liked the stories within the story...but then I also liked the movie Hackers so what do I know?
Re:Miranda (Score:1)
Stephenson as real literature (Score:1)
On a side note, those of you who liked Snow Crash may be interested in Jonathon Lethem's Gun With Occasional Music, which I bought for the title and loved.
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Mirror (Score:1)
Re:Un-fun endings--Stephenson's Bane (Score:1)
While I haven't read Snow Crash, I did really feel that way about The Diamond Age. The first half to three-quarters of the book was incredible. I was so addicted to it that I had trouble putting it down to even get some sleep. So I guess I sort of read the ending just to finish it and out of inertia, since it got really, well, off. Didn't seem to fit the rest of the book, and in many ways was a let-down.
The whole topic of the book however was so exciting. I've always had an interest in nanotechnology, but the amount he got into shows that he put a lot of thought and effort into trying to come up with something believable and realistic, based on what we know know.
This book in a way pushed me even more into thinking about nanotech. Enough so as to do other reading on the web (such as checking out The Foresight Institute [foresight.org], and seriously considering doing more studying and going back to school to try and get into the nanotech field - instead of waiting and hoping, I think I'd much prefer to help make it happen in my lifetime.
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More Neal Stephenson (Score:1)
I believe he writes under the "pen-name": Stephen Bury. Under this name he has at least two books that I know about, but I can only remember one right now' "Interface". This is a weird book about, politics, media, mind contral and whole bunch more. Definitely not on the same level as "Snow Crash" or "Crypto.." but interesting nonetheless.
Re:Snow Crash is still my favorite (Score:1)
Re:More Neal Stephenson (Score:1)
Re:Another book to buy... (Score:1)
I really like the Diamond Age. It presents some amazing insights into technology and the uses/consequences.
Neil has a way of invoking the thought process on what he wrote, even long after I am done reading. To me, thats a sign of a really good author.
Zodiac / Diamond Age / Snow Crash (Score:1)
The "fantasy" sequences, as someone's mentioned already, are highly integral to the story, and not just there for atmosphere. The Turing machines are the key to the female protagonist's entire role in the story, as ineptly handled as some may think it to be.
Incidentally, besides Snow Crash, his earlier work, Zodiac, is a great read, and well worth tracking down. Stephenson self-deprecates himself about it in the liner notes of his other books (Zodiac being very popular among "waste-water management engineers" and the like), but it's on par with, if not superior to, anything else he's done since.
If you liked Diamond Age... (Score:1)
Queen of Angels is set mostly in a near future LA, similar to Stephenson's Snow Crash. This novel isn't so heavy on the nanotech, but does introduce some concepts on alternate modes of networking. There's also a strong Voudon element, which you'll either adore or loathe.
The sequel, Slant, is one of those rare novels that's better than its predecessor. But it's essential you read Queen of Angels for its development of the main characters. Here, Bear introduces some ingenious ideas on massively parallel computing, nanotechnology, and AI, making them jump to life. I also got the feeling that Bear either was inspired by The Diamond Age, or else had exchanged memes with Stephenson at some point. If you didn't like the slow pace of The Diamond Age, then Slant is more your speed.
These novels represent some of Greg Bear's best work (which definitely does not include his recent Foundation novel). He's got an easily plausible view of where infotech and nanotech will take us in 20 or 30 years...
Interactive Fiction again.... and some rumours (Score:1)
Disappointment (Score:1)
I bought Diamond Age back when it came out, but haven't been able to get deep into it at all. I bought Cryptonomicon a few months back, but got angry at it and quit reading it at about the midpoint of the book.
Stephenson has become pedantic, and he pads his prose with so much filler material that it's infuriating. His stuff reads like a quick thriller novel, except for the quick part. It can become painful, the action takes place so slowly.
It's a shame, because he shows such potential in some of his earlier works. At least the stuff he's published under his psuedonym (Steven Bury) is still fun to read.
One gets the feeling that he's grown full of himself. Has surrounded himself by a cult, and doesn't have to write very well anymore to keep a throng of admirers around him.
It's dangerous to do that.
I would like to sell my hardbound editions of Cryptonomicon and The Diamond Age. If you're interested in buying them at a fairly low cost, write me at ScottSt@netscape.net. Both are very clean copies with undamaged slipcovers.
My copies of "The Big U" and "Zodiac" are NOT for sale. And every time I loan out "Snow Crash" I don't get the copy back so I am looking for a copy of that at the moment.
Re:Nano (Score:1)
Though not exactly about nano, his Blood Music is also very good.
Re:Snow Crash is more approachable (Score:1)
Anyone interested in real nanotech, try... (Score:2)
On nanotech itself... (Score:1)
Neal Stephenson's "The Great Simoleon Caper" (Score:1)
It's "The Great Simoleon Caper", a very funny yet "with it" story concerning digital currency, conspiracies and Jolt Cola.
Here's a rare link:
http://kuoi.asui.uidaho.edu/~kamikaze/documents
Somebody please mirror it before it gets Slashdotted or is otherwise lost!
Plot disintegration (Score:1)
I couldn't finish Diamond Age. About three quaters throught the book all semblance of a captivating plot disapears and the book degenerates into a bunch of frayed threads, that dangle in the air. (I'm trying not to post spoilers, but I'll be more specific if anyone likes).
Don't get me wrong, Stephenson numbers amoung my favorite authors, but even the best authors have thier off days. IMHO, Zodiac (about an eco-terrorist) is a much better read then diamond age, (its about the same length) and it actually ends pretty well.
Locust.
A question and a comment (Score:1)
Fantasy World (Score:1)
I especially loved the representations and analogies Stephensen used to teach computer science concepts. That was cool.
Don't Forget... (Score:1)
possibly my favorite novel, period (Score:1)
to only one book, this would be the one.
I don't even think the ending bad, though
it is a bit.. abrupt. another 50 pages
to flesh out the "seed" concept would
have been well spent.
Well done (Score:1)
It's a great short story, I think, and it would be a shame if it disappeared off the net like a few other early works of authors have done.
I just love the Jolt-guzzling sloth
Re:Miranda - important to Nell and Hackworth (Score:1)
Miranda was also important to Hackworth's development of the seed through the Drummers. Right before she was rescued she was about to combust from what were probably the final stages of the Seed design. It sounded like she was the only one who could complete that process, so the Seed wasn't completed. I'm not sure if it was because the information and nanosites that were in her were lost when she was rescued ... or if the reason she had all the information and nanosites in the first place was because she was the best carrier for them.
Anyway, I still like Snow Crash better than Diamond Age .. after the first description of the Drummers I wasn't quite so eager to read .. still an amazing book though :)
Nanotech dangers (Score:1)
It's going to take a lot of ingenious work by a lot of people to avoid that particular end game. I hope to play a part.
Stephenson in Internet Top 100 List (Score:1)
The relative ranking of Diamond Age and Snow Crash pretty much agrees with my opinon. Diamond Age had very well developed characters and plot; Snow Crash was a bit cheezier. I'm still waiting my turn to get Cryptonomicon out of the local library, so I have no opinion on this yet.
SF/Fantasy fans should check this list out; there are a few gems (like Cordwainer Smith) that are rarely heard of.
JMC
Re:Stephenson's Pseudonym (Score:1)
It's a decent novel, but just amazingly bitter about the functioning of the government buracracy. Where _Interface_ was funny and cynical about the political process, _Cobweb_ is simply viscious and pessimistic. He may be right and things in Washington may be as abyssmal as he says, but it does not make for enjoyable reading.
It doesn't really have any of the techno-candy his other novels do. For a rating, I'd give it about 1/5 of a _Snow Crash_, maybe 1/2 an _Interface_.
Amusing anecdote (Score:1)
I saw Stephenson at an appearance in support of TDA and (of course) got him to sign my copy, which is now one of my most cherished possessions. During the Q&A session someone asked him "What was the most difficult task you faced in writing the book?" After a moment's pause, he replied:
"Creating a plausible nanotechnological future in which everyone wasn't dead."
Re:What a coincidence! (Score:1)
I pretty well read, and I like to think I have a broader vocabulary than your average American, but I've been stumbling over words that I've never heard nor seen before in this book. It's a little frustrating, since it seems that many times the meaning of the word can't be deduced from the context. I hate having to keep my Webster's next to me when I'm reading!
But I've got to admit, it's a pretty good read so far.
Snow Crash is still my favorite (Score:1)
Two more excellent Stephenson reads in Wired:
Re:My favorite Stephenson Novel (Score:1)
That's unfortunate, you should keep looking... it's a really funny book. Much different than his others, but just as good. I found a copy at my local library, perhaps you should look into the library loan system if your library doesn't have a copy. Good luck.
Stephenson's Pseudonym (Score:2)
Why you shouldn't skip... (Score:1)